Pieces of me

by keitaro   Sep 27, 2007


I've become so numb
of what have you done
now I'm losing
and i know you've won

I'd take all the sorrows
from every goodbye
I'd shed all the tears
so no one ever needs to cry

I'd take all the pain
that i feels inside
but my heart was broken
so i try to hide

I'd keep all my emotion
so no one will see
but i need an answer to my question
why that love was not meant for me?

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  • 17 years ago

    by RachiBubbles

    Very well written maybe you could express more about what u want like more words that fit you....i mean don't get me wrong its an awesome poem but you know what i mean? ask questions if you don't :]

  • 17 years ago

    by A F

    Aww.
    i like the last two lines.

    keep writing. (=
    xxx.

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    I really like this poem, a lot. good job<3

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