Lost in the past of what use to be

It should be "used" lol just a small typo i saw...I make em all the time. Good job. Sad poem indeed. Your 3rd through 6th lines were my fav! They really had good imagery and had a unique twist on the same thought.
Nice job!
Charisma*

Wow a very sad peace quite descriptive 4.5 that rounds up to a 5 maybe u can read one of mine.