Good Day

by JustKristina   Sep 27, 2007


The sun is bright,
What a good day!
Nothings wrong,
No clouds in sight.

I loved that day,
That I met you.
I loved being with you.
It was the perfect day!

Their are clouds in the distance.
But, its still a good day!
Every thing's OK!
It all makes sense.

We both were different.
But that's what I liked about you.
I felt like everything was great
With all the time we spent.

The sky is darkening,
Somethings gone wrong!
Today was going so good!
Who expected a storm?

I try not to cry,
As you sit there
And put me down.
Over and over again and again.

What happened?
To that bright sunny day?
I remember it so well!
But yet, it seems so far away.

Sometimes I wonder,
Was there even a sun?
Maybe it was just my imagination.
And I made it all up.

How much longer,
Should I take this?
It was such a good day,
Now nothings OK.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sumit Ojha

    Huh... Nice poem (5/5)

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSuicidalxx

    Awesome poem! Loved it! Vivid imagery too and the flow was good. Keep writing! Great work on this!!!!!!! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Devon

    I love your poem! the ideas are so orginal and organize, easy to read! keep up the good work 5/5

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