I love this poem it just shows what it's like to be love hope i'll find someone like that one day..Stace..x

I know how u feel.

Excellent job......very well written and the flow is great - Lots of emotion, and very easy to relate to!...thanks.

Like it.. And I really think the repetition of the 1st and last bit works xxx

You're the reason
That I dream
Every night
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I love these lines. You write very well, and you poems come from the heart. Keep up the great work. 5/5

How cute! I could totally relate to this one and I was smiling throughout the whole piece. Beautiful work *5/5*

Aww.. this is so sweet...loved it! beautiful job on this piece! :) keep up the awesome work! 5/5

Great work 5/5 ^^ woot woot! go you ^^

I really liked this one ^^ great work 5/5

Wow i loved it i can relate to this poem great job keep up the excellent work

I loved this poem. i only had one problem.
"your the reason
for the hearts
on my paper"
i thought this was an amazing paragraph and so true to what so many girls feel and do, but i wouldnt have repeated it. but thats just me
otherwise a great poem. i really enjoyed it.
xx
Taegan Emily

Hey, I really liked your poem I thought it was really good! I'd love to hear what you think of some of mine.
~dino~