Comments : Hazel(part one)

  • 17 years ago

    by Kali

    Uhh I don't know if this is true but if it is...I'm here for you!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Nil

    I can relate to this poem. 5/5 thanks for the comments btw

  • 17 years ago

    by MusoXDanielle

    I can also relate to this poem!
    5/5
    Also if this is true i know how you feel :-)

    Keep up the writing!

    Danielle
    X

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    This is awsome, sad, i like tha line "love not worth the pain" and "her bright green eye's glazes over mine" really good

  • 16 years ago

    by Im So OVER IT

    Wow. This poem is just good. You really have some great talent. Keep writing

  • 16 years ago

    by DreamingOutLoud

    Powerful ending.