by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex Sep 27, 2007
category :
Life, society /
about society
In today's round it's a curse painted with prosperity |
I didn't enjoy this poem quite as much as the others. It's definitely a good idea but it just seems like there's a bit too much wrapped up in one poem. My mind's going too many directions at once. |
by Teria
DSGLKASJDG. |
Man, you sure know how to cut a person down, overall good poem, you almost lost me in the middle but have no fear i stayed on |
I think the mnost upfront thing that shines through this poem is the way the language is layed out to help your reader plus entertain them at the same time. it is a real thought provoking poem :D xxx alex xxx |
by Prophecies In Kodak
<shit> is a bad word. |