by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx Sep 27, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
She kissed him goodnight |
by Roxy
Wow, It was shut a simple poem but yet the last stanza had such a strong meaning. My dad somtimes drinks and drives my mum doesnt let him any more though =P lol. Amazing work the rhyming was outstanding xxx Much love from Roxy |
Wow, what a powerful message, good format, and nice write |
by elmahdy
I liked this one so much u are so talented. ur words really touch me inside ;) |
by Melpomene
The story behind this was great and really touching it showed what can happened from drink driving and I really appreicate you getting the point across with it and making people understand. The flow was good and the emotions you portrayed I could actually feel. So well done on this one keep on writing. ~Mel |
Wow i love it |