An applause for you is well deserved. Simply...well-worded, and a beautiful, sad piece of literature...your emotions are portrayed through a mesmerizing poetic silence.

I really liked this stanza: He was sober
Alert and ready
Not knowing
Another driver's eyes
Were getting heavy

Great job!

Wow i love it
it made me shiver a little the detail and emotion is so good you can feel it
great job =]

The story behind this was great and really touching it showed what can happened from drink driving and I really appreicate you getting the point across with it and making people understand. The flow was good and the emotions you portrayed I could actually feel. So well done on this one keep on writing. ~Mel

I liked this one so much u are so talented. ur words really touch me inside ;)

Wow, what a powerful message, good format, and nice write

your servant:
atticus

Wow, It was shut a simple poem but yet the last stanza had such a strong meaning. My dad somtimes drinks and drives my mum doesnt let him any more though =P lol. Amazing work the rhyming was outstanding xxx Much love from Roxy