Cries for freedom.

by damont   Sep 28, 2007


You can hear the heavy breathing
feeling good getting over all the grieving
giving your all in that sprint for life
changing your feeling and giving your body a better fight
I'm giving you a form of insight
your body rebels against your mind
your will and determination are hard to find
you can feel the pulse of your heart
but yet your heart begins to weigh
it feels like your carrying a boulder which you can't escape
this is when your will takes over
but your judgment becomes as if you were sober
aimlessly your body wonders
your soul cries out like thunder
the winds move beside you
your body becomes like a screw
you reached your limit and can't turn anymore
if you continue to push death comes at your door
now the good feeling has moved along
and your will is played a death song
your soul pushes itself out of your body
the body can't contain the strain you tried to relieve
your soul is freed finally, and its flying at full speed.

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  • 17 years ago

    by oddi tea

    Oh wow, so deep!! what was your inspiration?

  • 17 years ago

    by Mary

    OMG another good poem, no wonder the author is you lol. I like the rhyming and the whole poem lol. Keep up the good work :]