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by Teria Sep 28, 2007 category : Sadness, depression / other
Last To Know.Childish minds await defeat, dreams lie open, incomplete. Forms of self-worth turn to vile, each individual soon defile(s). With nothing left to even lose, mind changing, unable to choose. What's left awaiting? - - Nothing at all. What's left awaiting? - - Demon's call. Forever dreaming of what could be, missing truths beyond ability to see. And, I'm the last to know - - awaiting defeat. While dreams lie open, incomplete.
by Independence Forever
You had me from the first defeat to the last incomplete, very good your servant: atticus
by Lisa
Great work! keep it up -Lisa
by Mary
Great poem. I like the rhythm and rhyme. keep up the good work :]