by Mousie
Wow, another amazing one for you. i love that your poems come straight from the heart. i can't wait to read the next installation, you're starting to pass me up on number of poems lol, i gotta pick up the pace! |
I thought it was very sweet, but it should be "mixed signals", other than that great job, an enjoyable read. |
by Avan Ahmad
Listen to your heart and it will let you know exactly what she wants you to know ^_^. dast xosh. |
by ECILA ice
This was simple yet a good poem. actually i loved the last stanza, it made me more interesting and sweet.. keep up the good work! |
by Dana
I loved how you used words like but and or in their own line...it really made me feel confused...like the title suggests. Great GREAT use of structure, that really made the poem. so 5/5 from me |
by Dana
I loved how you used words like but and or in their own line...it really made me feel confused...like the title suggests. Great GREAT use of structure, that really made the poem. so 5/5 from me |
by Miu
Awww Great work, Nice topic you touch in this poem. Taking moments right out of life itself, many could connect to it. Also, It was simple to read and I like that! |