Sad :(

Great poem, really well written.

No point in trying
The end is already here
Crying wont help you
It lives off your tears
The salty taste its fuel to keep chasing
Apologize until your blue
You'll never get through
It won't take your bribes
You wont get to see the light
It's over for you now
It just waits till you give in

this poem is sooo true!!! the part i copyed and pasteded? is soo my life i can relate to it... when someones depressed they feel they can never leave the world there in.. and people who arent depressed dont understand what we can see and hear.. i love your writting i wish i new a really high number to give you
20000000/20000000

All I have to say, beautiful free write.

-Sam

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