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by Tabitha Sep 28, 2007 category : Love, romance / lost love
In the distance, I hear your voice My Heart starts to melt, I start to rejoice. As time passes by, Tensions start to rise, I find myself asking "Why are you being so nice?" Is it because you broke my heart? Causing me to be torn apart? Why should I hold on? This is just a phase. You told me you loved her, You said it to my face Seeing there's no point, In trusting you, I can feel by broken heart Turning blue. So can you please tell me again? Why am I Falling For You? - Heartbroken Chic
by Nix
If you add some metaphors in to this one you will express your emotions on a better way and atmosphere could be more powerful. I like the idea, ending is very emotional and effective.
by Finalgravedigger
Wow a i know what you mean 4/5
by Devon
Awesome