by kIROS DELA VEGA Sep 28, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
It's gone |
Very strong poem, very beautifully written, keep writing. |
by Tammy
This was very good and very meaningful. I liked the fact that you have hope for tomorrow. Things will get better. Believe me..been there, done that. |
by Kat
I really like how you ended the poem with a hopeful line: |
by Ingrid
Hold on to that thought, son! |
by rain
Great! |