Comments : Nobody loves me

  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Greatly written. You expressed your emotions excellently. I can relate to some parts of this piece.
    My favorite lines are:

    -Deep inside, something is missing
    The love and tender kissing
    She walked out herself
    Now all I do is talk to myself
    in the mirror, with my reflection-

    Keep up :)

  • 17 years ago

    by rain

    Great!
    i love this one
    i love this part
    "I can't love myself because no one does
    I'm all alone and no longer what I once was
    But the only thing that keeps me alive
    Is knowing that the next day, it might all change
    For the best
    And that "nobody" becomes somebody"
    seems like i can relate

  • 17 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Hold on to that thought, son!
    You'll be fine once you're healed.
    Nice poem, by the way!

    Take care,
    5/5 Ingrid

  • 17 years ago

    by Kat

    I really like how you ended the poem with a hopeful line:

    "For the best
    And that "nobody" becomes somebody"

    Really good! Full of pure and true emotion. 5/5

    ~Kat~

  • 17 years ago

    by Tammy

    This was very good and very meaningful. I liked the fact that you have hope for tomorrow. Things will get better. Believe me..been there, done that.
    Take care my friend!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Indian Comma Bean

    Very strong poem, very beautifully written, keep writing.