Greatly written. You expressed your emotions excellently. I can relate to some parts of this piece. |
by rain
Great! |
by Ingrid
Hold on to that thought, son! |
by Kat
I really like how you ended the poem with a hopeful line: |
by Tammy
This was very good and very meaningful. I liked the fact that you have hope for tomorrow. Things will get better. Believe me..been there, done that. |
Very strong poem, very beautifully written, keep writing. |