Do It For Me

by shymoon   Sep 28, 2007


What shall I do
To take his tears away
What shall I do
To hear his voice again
Days passing us
Without wondering where we stops
What shall I make
To take his fears away
What shall I take
To make him smile again
I don't know
Where I have to go
Can you tell me
Because I can't see
Before I lose my mind
Cause the thing I'm looking for in you
I can't find

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  • 16 years ago

    by Lemma

    This is really sweet and genuine and I especially like the ending. One thing I would say is that in the line

    "Without wondering where we stops"

    "Stops" should perhaps be changed to "stop" just to make the flow 100% perfect. But overall, I really like this. My favourite lines are:

    "What shall I make
    To take his fears away
    What shall I take
    To make him smile again"

    5/5

    Em xXx

  • 17 years ago

    by shymoon

    Thx guys i'm from lebanon i hope that all my poems that i will write you will like it

  • 17 years ago

    by BreakeR

    Nice Poem... Keep It Up.. Dont Stop..

    Where You From ?

  • 17 years ago

    by Rabeya

    Nice...who's it for?

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