Nice...who's it for?

Nice Poem... Keep It Up.. Dont Stop..

Where You From ?

Thx guys i'm from lebanon i hope that all my poems that i will write you will like it

This is really sweet and genuine and I especially like the ending. One thing I would say is that in the line

"Without wondering where we stops"

"Stops" should perhaps be changed to "stop" just to make the flow 100% perfect. But overall, I really like this. My favourite lines are:

"What shall I make
To take his fears away
What shall I take
To make him smile again"

5/5

Em xXx