Rest

by Filledwithjoy   Sep 28, 2007


Staring at you
Breathing
In and out
Struggling
Fighting for life
Just wanting it to be over
But it cant be
What awaits you once you pass on?
Will God be waiting to take you into his arms>?
Have you sinned to be condemned to the eery depths of hell?
Why must you leave.
Why must you go
I am sitting here missing you so.
Why must you cough up blood.
Why must you struggle.
Are you drowning?
Do you give up>?
If you dont go on I dont either
Please.
Live on.
Live on for me
Live on in spirit
Rest old man
It is now safe
Rest and never be bothered again

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  • 17 years ago

    by Keith

    Wow, theres nothing wrong with this at all, it still captures emotion heavily :) im sure you can write as well as me :) strnge that theres just the 1 or 2 comments here

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