I like the topic and whole story from the beginning to the end, greatly written. You managed to express feelings very well, and you have good choice of words through the poem.
My favorite stanza is:

-The words mersmerized me
For I felt the same way
She was going through that time
Telling me to continue
Those magical lines......-

Keep up!

It is really interesting and some parts of this poem are truly excellently written. Very emotional piece, you mixed atmosphere with greatly described feelings and that is powerful. I don't like few lines, and flow is a little bit off in some parts but all in all great poem.

I would have to disagree with this poem but it was welll written a little more of a story form in a poem, had deep meaning and emotions, with true flow it was great 5/5

Great poem, beautiful flow and structure.Wonderfully written. Keep it up, Love Greta, Talk soon. xo

Great ideas! i love it! 5/5

Soo sad.....ganda...