Heyy this was really sad.. hope ur ok. anyway good job expressing urself lot of emotion xx

So easy for others to say
"Don't worry, you'll be okay"
It's only a matter of time
Your worries will wash away

i totally understand what you mean by this stanza, it is a part of someone that only you can come to terms with onyl you can compremise, i luv how you expressed yourself through this poem and how u used your words and lines, well done *hugs* xox sam

Holy **** when i saw the little 1 next to your name i thought my eyes were playing tricks on me. first let me say, I've missed your writing and this poem reminds me exactly why..so much say depth and emotion filled with so much meaning..beautifully and elegantly written..as always. and welcome back!

Omg dis poem shos alot of emotions i luv it u should keep up da good work!!!
=D

That was very beautiful <3

This was great i really liked it and could relate <333 5/5

You can always tell when a poem comes from the heart..and this one did.
Beautiful write, I loved it.

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

Oh...This is heartbreaking. My heart is breaking from reading such sad, yet beautiful, words.

"The path is quite rough
Broken hearts and a pail of tears
But the future must be bright
Not like my yesteryears"

Such a sad stanza... i'm glad you're writing again though. It's heartbreakingly beautiful
5/5
*Gem*

Wow, this was absolutely amazing. Although it's a sad love poem, I felt it through my heart. Great poem.

I noticed you write alot of love poetry which is great but I wanted to see how you wrote with sad and dark poetry also. This was fantastic. Your quite the beautiful writer. This was heart braking and deep. Each word hit my heart. Well done on writing this. Don't stop writing. ~Mel