by Beautiful Chaos Sep 28, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
I sit and ponder the beautiful landscape of your being, |
Aweh, cute. I loved this, the imagery was more than amazing in this piece, you took above and beyond. The only thing I could find was, in the line "I sit and ponder the the beautiful landscape of your being," .. you have 'the' one too many times, lol. Other than that, perfect. |
by Ingrid
Beautifully written poem! I enjoyed reading it very much. |