Comments : Daydreaming

  • 17 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Beautifully written poem! I enjoyed reading it very much.

    Take care,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 17 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    Aweh, cute. I loved this, the imagery was more than amazing in this piece, you took above and beyond. The only thing I could find was, in the line "I sit and ponder the the beautiful landscape of your being," .. you have 'the' one too many times, lol. Other than that, perfect.

    5.5
    :]