Deceitful Truth

by JaM   Sep 28, 2007


Such confusion arises
within my black mind,
Tired of people's voices
reasoning is undefined.

I bite the bullet
and sacrifice sanity,
everywhere I go
I use profanity.

Venturing through hell
this planet where we live,
a world of something
where we get what we give.

Seeking my destiny
towards the end,
the way of life
I'll never apprehend.

Twisted and burned
into the dust of ashes,
flesh disintigrating
as my blood splashes.

Living a nightmare
with no easy street,
our eyes have fooled us
we're surrounded by deceit.

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  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Very effective and unique. I like the descriptions through the whole piece. You used good words to express your feelings. My favorite stanza is:

    -Living a nightmare
    with no easy street,
    our eyes have fooled us
    we're surrounded by deceit.-

    Some parts of the poem are very deep, too.
    Well done!
    5/5 from me

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Okay. i don't think i can describe how much i loved this... this is frikken awesome. the imagery you portrayed created very vivid pictures in my mind and the flow was good throughout. i loved the ending i found it to be intense and stunning, and it wrapped the piece up perfectly.

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