Okay. i don't think i can describe how much i loved this... this is frikken awesome. the imagery you portrayed created very vivid pictures in my mind and the flow was good throughout. i loved the ending i found it to be intense and stunning, and it wrapped the piece up perfectly.

Very effective and unique. I like the descriptions through the whole piece. You used good words to express your feelings. My favorite stanza is:

-Living a nightmare
with no easy street,
our eyes have fooled us
we're surrounded by deceit.-

Some parts of the poem are very deep, too.
Well done!
5/5 from me