Very deep and excellently written, with great wording and rhythm from the beginning to the end. I like the topic that you wrote about, very creative. |
I loved the poem. Great use of imagery and contrast to evoke feelings and convey a message. Nice work, keep it up! |
by Katie
The lines in this are uneven, which usually throws off the flow, but I don't think that's the case in this one. I believe a lot of people can relate to this as well. You really did an awesome job on this. =] Keep it up. |