Comments : Past's Infusion

  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Very deep and excellently written, with great wording and rhythm from the beginning to the end. I like the topic that you wrote about, very creative.
    My favorite stanza is:

    -I have seen everything,
    And know nothing at all.
    Except perhaps the
    Importance of
    Knowing that
    Courage means to
    Rise again,
    When you fall.-

    The ending is also very deep and effective.
    5/5 from me

  • 17 years ago

    by FELTON PHILLIPS

    I loved the poem. Great use of imagery and contrast to evoke feelings and convey a message. Nice work, keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Katie

    The lines in this are uneven, which usually throws off the flow, but I don't think that's the case in this one. I believe a lot of people can relate to this as well. You really did an awesome job on this. =] Keep it up.