Wow.
That was amazing.
You two do magnificent collabs together.
It had great word usage, the flow was flawless, & the emotions were very powerful.

"I would pray up to God in heaven,
But there is not a belief of him in me,
Because how could there be a god,
When darkness is all that I can see"

^ I loved the ending, it was perfect. Overall: 5.5 Great job you two. :)

-- Stephanie Lynn .+.

Another strong poem i love it.
i cant really say too much more then i did previously so i guess its just the same old same old. great description and great style
5.5 (again)
rock on
lml