Just for you.

by Miu   Sep 28, 2007


A sun, middle of blackness shines tonight.
A hole in the picture that won't be complete.
You can try taking my heart away,
But it's not in this place called earth.
Drown my fears.
You can make me cry,
Make those red, yellow leafs fall in autumn, my skies.
Screaming in middle of the night.
Your name still echos everywhere around.
Even when the wind is blowing my mind away.
Even when my ears can't listen.
Even when i won't ask you to stay.
Cover my face with a white mask that smiles,
To make me inhuman, beyond all lies.
And write my emotions down,
On piece of paper, as it burns.
And let the ashes wash away on shore,
Turn around, and walk bit by bit.
till soul of me touch the skies,
There is no need to try.
Not for me.

* This is for my childhood friend who commited suicide. Just for you.
I wrote it as it came.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sora

    A wonderful tribute.
    very emotional, very pure.
    i loved it!
    you expressed yerself very well, you seemed truthful and honest, and i believe every word came right from yer very heart.
    you did a wonderful job, keep up the nice work!
    5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    This a very beautiful piece ... very heartfelt...
    beautiful words and wonderful imagery..
    "And let the ashes wash away on shore,
    Turn around, and walk bit by bit.
    till soul of me touch the skies,
    There is no need to try.
    Not for me."
    ^^ so much emotion hidden beneath those words...
    loved it..
    excellent write..

  • 17 years ago

    by Fiend in the Iron Maiden

    Awww, im sorry about your friend T_T if there is anything I can do to help im here ^^ but good poem

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by ali

    Aww i am so sorry that the cause for such a beautifully sad poem is such a deep and tragic event, i'm sorry for that. but this is a really good poem, full of emotion...5/5
    - ali x x x x x

  • 17 years ago

    by gurbatt

    Wah wah its realy interesting poem , keep writing like this , I dont know in which thoughts did you write this poem but I get it for my tragedy and I have lots sad moments which can bee seen in your poem. good job and best of luck

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