This a very beautiful piece ... very heartfelt...
beautiful words and wonderful imagery..
"And let the ashes wash away on shore,
Turn around, and walk bit by bit.
till soul of me touch the skies,
There is no need to try.
Not for me."
^^ so much emotion hidden beneath those words...
loved it..
excellent write..

A wonderful tribute.
very emotional, very pure.
i loved it!
you expressed yerself very well, you seemed truthful and honest, and i believe every word came right from yer very heart.
you did a wonderful job, keep up the nice work!
5/5.