Comments : Visions In Flames

  • 17 years ago

    by DeathlyAmore

    O0o0o! I have done this before. 8D

    I love the fact you used repetition in the poem with 'blurred'.

    "Blurred.

    My visions are in flames,
    Burning throughout the night;
    They twist - they turn
    Seemingly out of sight.

    They are scarcely seen. Blurred. "

    ^^ I love that part. It stuck out in my head above the rest of the poem.

    Again, I loved the repetition, your title matched your poem, your poem had correct grammar and punctuation from what I see.

    I LOVE IT.

    I voted 5/5

    -Sam