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by DeathlyAmore
O0o0o! I have done this before. 8D I love the fact you used repetition in the poem with 'blurred'. "Blurred. My visions are in flames, Burning throughout the night; They twist - they turn Seemingly out of sight. They are scarcely seen. Blurred. " ^^ I love that part. It stuck out in my head above the rest of the poem. Again, I loved the repetition, your title matched your poem, your poem had correct grammar and punctuation from what I see. I LOVE IT. I voted 5/5 -Sam