Thats a great poem. It was way over my head for a second, but after a second read, it was amazing! Great write. Keep it up.

~Mo~

Wow, I really like the language you have used here, the word choice is interesting and has an impact. I don't understand all the complexities here but I'm guessing it's only for you to understand fully :) Nice work

-Ariana

...I love this from start to finish!....Been there, still there...
...and these days, at this end, I dig even more deeply.....

Strive On!

"Snob"??

Wonderful use of language and such striking imagery for a subject close to my heart. Well done!