A Poem To Her Beloved.

My will to float into the sky,
and caress the shimmering diamonds.
Matches my intense longing,
to run my finger's through your hair.
^This stanza made absolute no sense.

sturdy oak
^This didn't make any sense either because an oak is the most weakes kind of tree there is.

Okay honestly the poem is a mess. I couldn't understand this poem at all. The flow was really hard to catch on too. Could really use work. But don't give up i just think you need to go over this poem and instead of trying to use enhancing words so much use them everynow and then mixing it with basic words. You seem to try too hard to make it enhance other than make sense. Don't feel bad I've done this so many times, but don't feel bad or take it personally I'm only trying to help you out for the near future. :)
<3tay
4/5

Well , veryt very nice expressions , i can tell you i read it more then 2 times, i would encourage you thought to embed a good rhyme in it it will impact more !!

Just simply lovely 5/5

This was a good poem, although there was a couple of grammar errors, and the poem words didn't fit together that much. It's all right though. 3/5

<mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

My will to float into the sky,
and caress the shimmering diamonds.
Matches my intense longing,
to run my finger's through your hair.
^this was just soo sweet.
i loved this poem so much cause not only does it flow and is a beautiful love poem, it really describes love, and the feelings of it.
5/5
gaby