A hug and a kiss
by Steve_G May 4, 2004
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20 years ago
Great poem! I love you're poetry. I hope to read more soon. Keep up the wonderful work.
Love,
Ashley -
20 years ago
by LiL One
Yes sometimes a hug and a kiss can make it feel all better and I really liked this poem becuase it is the truth...LiL One
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20 years ago
Awesome poem! I kinda like the shortness of it... it really says a lot in just a few words....but it would be good as a longer one as well....
I was thinking that maybe you accidentally put this line in "A hug and a kiss to cope" But then I realized what you were doing... (rhyming cope with throw, which is fine) You have such a nice, unique format here...and I think it just needs a little tweaking to be perfect... How about this for the first two sets:
A hug and a kiss
Is all i need
To enable me to cope
A hug and a kiss
Is all I need
To handle what life can throw
That will keep the format even....
It really is a great poem though! -
20 years ago
by heather
hey hun gr8 poem u r a very sweet guy luv ya luv heather
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20 years ago
by martynsgirl
yeah what they said
