Can it be?

by StormyStar   Sep 29, 2007


She would do anything for this guy
If it would make him happy she would die
To hang out with him to her parents she must lie
Not seeing him the pain she must hide

So one day she wanted to know if his feelings were real
For she did not want to hurt or her heart he would steal
She did not know how to explain but love she must feel

You see thats not the whole story to what all shes done
Shes messed up so much and yet he says he loves her a ton
Can it be true is he really her love is he the one
Shes waited for him to come and now that hes here shes had fun

How will such a pretty little girl deal with the pain?
If he dont love her back she could go insane
Shes a wild soul not easy to hold on to or to tame
The only thing she can do is hope that he feels the same

When she sees him the dark in her eyes turn to light
The fear she has will go away when hes there every night
To hold him again she would be so happy and full of delight
To keep him in her life all she can do is fight

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I liked this a whole lot better than the other one i read. the flow was shaky in a couple of places but for the most part it flowed well. the depth and emotion you put into this was lovely, very clear for the reader to see. words can't even express how much i loved the last line..it was a beautiful way to wrap it up. beautifully and elegantly written.

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSuicidalxx

    Love it! This poem was soo good! I rate it a ten as well! Keep up the awesome work!!!!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by jLegendc

    Man.. i wish there was a girl who'd lie to her parents for me.. even tho it's wrong.. it kinda makes me feel good if my girl will do sumthing wrong to be with me.. great poem!

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaz

    Hmmm a fine piece.. something straight forwrd.. n relatable to so many.. othrs.. but u express it really nicely.. gr8 wrkk

  • 17 years ago

    by Cheryl

    Wow i thought it was great...had alot of meanin to me personaly...all i have to say is keep up the great work...i look foward to reading more ;)