I THINK ITS REALLY GOOD!
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!

XOXO
ALYSSA
P.S. COMMENT MINE! PLEASE!

Great job chica!!!!!!!
amanda

I give it a 10~~

WOW I THINK ITS GREAT AND I CAN TOTTALY SEE HOW U FEEL INSIDE <3

Wow i thought it was great...had alot of meanin to me personaly...all i have to say is keep up the great work...i look foward to reading more ;)

Hmmm a fine piece.. something straight forwrd.. n relatable to so many.. othrs.. but u express it really nicely.. gr8 wrkk

Man.. i wish there was a girl who'd lie to her parents for me.. even tho it's wrong.. it kinda makes me feel good if my girl will do sumthing wrong to be with me.. great poem!

Love it! This poem was soo good! I rate it a ten as well! Keep up the awesome work!!!!!!!

I liked this a whole lot better than the other one i read. the flow was shaky in a couple of places but for the most part it flowed well. the depth and emotion you put into this was lovely, very clear for the reader to see. words can't even express how much i loved the last line..it was a beautiful way to wrap it up. beautifully and elegantly written.