House without a home

by Finalgravedigger   Sep 29, 2007


House without a home

A house that has no life
lives in great strife
empty all day and night
only has company of fright.

Barren all around
No home to be found
deserted and left alone
all it can do is moan.

With no one to keep it warm
nothing to protect it from storms
just wanting any amount of care
sadly it will be found no where.

Not one happy moment
no security equals torment
memories are so vague
this house is just a plague.

Slowly it dies
but it cant even cry
for it never had a home
it was always just made of stone.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Rachele

    Thanks a lot for the comment, it was very appreciated. I loved this poem. I deffinatly understood the message behind it. You're a very talented writer. Great Job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Tiffany

    It flowed well, great!

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    I really love it, 5/5!

    I love the flow so much, and I can relate to it.

    thanks for reading my poem (lol I kinda made that one into a song actually)

  • 17 years ago

    by Charlie Knapton

    As promised i will read a poem of yours.
    this poem has so much emotion, it flowed great and was nicley written.
    well done.

  • 17 years ago

    by HollywoodSmile

    Wow. this poem describes my mothers house. god. very frightening to read something i can relate to that much. scares the shit out of me. like my mother. lol.

    --TheGothicAlbino

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