by Teria Sep 29, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
Burning deep inside lies bodies deathly cold, |
Gives me the urge to do something, no gonna say what. good poem |
by JR13
Im speachless this poem is real good. i agree with all your point of views. 5/5 nothing less... |
This has an interesting rhyme scheme, excellent use of language, and the poem carries a depth of meaning and message that is great- I had to read it a couple times to make sure I got it (and that's a good thing!). I love the title. Not what you expect upon reading the body of the poem, but that's what makes it fit so perfectly. |