This has an interesting rhyme scheme, excellent use of language, and the poem carries a depth of meaning and message that is great- I had to read it a couple times to make sure I got it (and that's a good thing!). I love the title. Not what you expect upon reading the body of the poem, but that's what makes it fit so perfectly.

Peace, Poetry & Power,

Gary Jurechka

Im speachless this poem is real good. i agree with all your point of views. 5/5 nothing less...

Gives me the urge to do something, no gonna say what. good poem

your servant:
atticus