WOW. Seriously, this is probably one of the best poems I've read on this site in a LONG time. Nicely done, and I'm lovin' the word choice. The flow was perfect, and the topic...just wow.

Very good. I loved this poem. It's written amazingly. I've wrote a few poems like this. I could picture everything that you wrote. Keep up the amazing writtening. 5/5

Wow...different....yet interesting...and very good...i like it alot

keep it up 5/5