Okay. so we all know we get tired of the "it's great" comments, like you said. LOL I enjoyed the fact that you tried writing in form poetry. That is so difficult for me. I always find it restricting, but have made it my goal to enter several poems in different forms. I mean, why not learn more of poetry right? I also wanted to thank you for your message to me on how to count flow and rhythm. I appreciate the suggestion, and am glad to know you enjoy my work, seeing as I was not sure you read it. LOL So that is a comfort and compliment to me. Once again, I appreciate your beautiful poetry and your suggestions!
Charisma*

"Like silver loops of chain around your neck is strung
So is the sparkle in your eyes beneath the sun"

excellent simile in those lines, you create a very real image...another great one from you--keep up the good work!

andrew

Very vivid imagery.
My favourite part of the poem was these two lines:
"Cascades of stars that hang with love
Bewitch the moon that glows above"
--- I think you have a very beautiful imagery here. Very unique.
Good work!

This poem is breathtaking, it is composed so perfectly, the flow is amazing and the words you have chosen painted a beautiful picture in my mind. 5/5, amazing job.