by rhonyl Sep 29, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
I have told you words |
by Krissymkitty
I really like this poem...i can relate... |
by Vanessa
Heartfelt words of the soul. well written, try reading your poem out loud after not looking at for a couple of days, to spot place where the flow is a little rocky. step up the vocab, to add power to your emtion, other than that good work 4/5 |
I can relate to this poem i know what you mean trust me 4/5 maybe u can read one of mine. |