Tears of pink

This is very great poem, I really amazed with your flow and word picking. It's so sentimental. Also the story is great too, 5/5 without a doubt!!!

Wow, I love this piece! It contains so vivid imagery weaved with superb choice of words and excellent descriptions. Great poem from the beginning to the end, with powerful and captivating atmosphere and fantastically expressed emotions.
My favorite stanza is:

-Given notice of a spell
Though the fingers won't entwine
Black riddles stay unspoken
Your words hurt more than mine-

Keep up, you have great talent!
5/5

"In the deep depths of the sea
Green clouds forming a brace
Smiles a girl with carved eyes
Blood plastered on her face"

These lines were dark and deep, but the entire poem was fabulous. 5/5

Very different. but enjoyable to read.

In the deep depths of the sea
Green clouds forming a brace
Smiles a girl with carved eyes
Blood plastered on her face..

i loved this part it kinda made me feel all chilly and for just words to do that it has to be really strong..keep it up u are very good. 5/5

This poem is very strongly written. i loved it alot. it kept my attention through the whole thing. my fave lines were

When love is making false appearances
And lies seem to be true
Then kiss my red contains for ever
Only the blackness belongs to you

keep it up. i loved it