Awe that was so sad and sweet. I loved it. Very beautifully written. |
by Nix
This poem would be even more better if you add some punctuation. |
by jLegendc
Great job! |
by Teria
Wow. |
by Melpomene
You just need to add more punctuation to this piece like capitalizing the "I's" so that it looks much better and is easier to read. I loved the flow of this poem I found it to be much better then your other pieces and the emotion was really heartfelt. A nice poem you have here. Keep up the good work. ~Mel |
by ECILA ice
A simple poem yet comprises a great sad and touching meaning.. it never ended like those usual poems i've read that seems to be so hopeless (yours is kindda different) keep it up. |
by Danielle
Its so cute and i just love it<33 |