Comments : Rising of the hollow

  • 17 years ago

    by Nix

    I like it, truly dark and it has outstanding imagery. I don't love zombies that much but you used some truly great words in it and atmosphere is really powerful.

    -And with sewed ears,
    Deafened themselves from the tempting sound of siren,
    No more lullabies that would deceive and hypnotize them-
    ^This stanza is so effective, well done!