This was so good. I loved it. Very well written.

Where do the broken hearts call home
While they are on the mend
Before they venture from the nest...
Until they love again.
^^^^
Jeannie I love this ending. The entire poem read so wonderfully smooth, though sad *wipes tear again* dang Auntie you do this to me all the time ... lol

Wonderfully penned Auntie!
Hugs
Luanne

This is a very sweet poem. It has a nursery rhyme feel. I know that sounds odd, but with references to the stars and moon, and the whole rhythm of the piece, it has that feel. I noticed one typo.

that lay heavy on you heart

I think it's supposed to be 'your' not 'you'. Just one thing I found.
Charisma*

Beautifully written, i love the whole concept of the poem...an interesting choice to have in the "love" category, can be interpreted in many different ways, keep up the good work!

Very good rhymes and flow!
The message behind this poem was rather unique. You really managed to keep me interested until the end of the poem.
The only downside of this poem is the fact that it could use some more punctuation. I think it would be easier to read.
Other than that, it was a very pleasant read.
5/5

~ Excellent ~

This realy spoke to me. I especially loved the last for lines becuase I question that often. WOW... KEEP UP THE AMAZING WRITING!

This poem was beautifully written...I LOVE IT! and i have always wondered the same thing 5/5 it was really good

SDFLHSLDFHLSDHFL OMG, THIS IS A GREAT POEM...AMAZING. I LOVE IT SO MUCH. I AM TAKEN ABACK IN AWE... WOW...5/5

Oh.....my....gosh....Its been a LONG time since I told somone thier poem was my recently favorite one read...Jeannie! This was amazing and is definatly my favorite up to date piece I've read...Its one thing to pick a subject and try to write about it and not keep the structure of the poem maintain throughout the whole poem, but you my friend, you picked this topic, kept hte flow going and have asked something many wondrer.....I LOVED this!! One of my faves!!
Chelsey

Going straight on my faves, Twisted!!

"Do stars up in the sky so bright
Clash with the fading moon
And tells it that the dreams you had
Will be returning soon"

Your poems always hit straight to the heart and this one is no exception.. a wonderful piece!
5/5
*gem*