A Warning Never To Be Forgotten

by Maiden Of Darkness   Sep 29, 2007


I see you in the hallway
I see you in my class
Your so damn annoying
I just want to kick your ass

First I'll grab you by your hair
Then punch you in the face
And continue throwing punches
Until blood is all you taste

Then I'll put you in a head lock
And throw you to the ground
All I hear is screaming
Gawd I love that sound

I listen to you suffer
As I kick you in the head
Bet you're wishing now,
You took back those words you said

... At last this fight is over
Can you believe that this was real?
You're lucky you're still breathing
Cause its your life I tried to steal

So I hope you've learned a lesson
Did I teach it to you well?
Cause the next time you try to threaten me,
I'll beat you straight to hell!

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  • 15 years ago

    by OmniLotus

    Freaking awsome! i loved the ontro!!! 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Kuro

    DAMN that was intense!!1 haha

    what made this amazing was not only did you describe the beat-down, but it flowed well and the rhyming was great!

    ah man, for some reason this made me smile... a lot. does that mean i'm disturbed?

  • 16 years ago

    by shamvi

    Whoa...love it...u rOck!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Fiend in the Iron Maiden

    Very good poem, I liked it allot woot woot! go you!, point for you!

    :AND THE CROWED GOES WILD RAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA:

    xd

  • 17 years ago

    by Beauty In The Breaking

    I loved the passion and anger that flows through this poem so strongly ^_^ I've wanted to do this to a few people a couple of times but had to control myself =P Fantastic job on writing this piece and it actually kinda made me smile =) 5/5
    ~*Rhea*~

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