Oh i liked ur anger here.... nice!!!
so many times i wished i cud do this 4 sum ppl.!!

I loved the passion and anger that flows through this poem so strongly ^_^ I've wanted to do this to a few people a couple of times but had to control myself =P Fantastic job on writing this piece and it actually kinda made me smile =) 5/5
~*Rhea*~

Very good poem, I liked it allot woot woot! go you!, point for you!

:AND THE CROWED GOES WILD RAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA:

xd

Whoa...love it...u rOck!!

DAMN that was intense!!1 haha

what made this amazing was not only did you describe the beat-down, but it flowed well and the rhyming was great!

ah man, for some reason this made me smile... a lot. does that mean i'm disturbed?

Freaking awsome! i loved the ontro!!! 5/5