A girl needs a daddy ( not sure of the subject)

by xoxkatrinaxox   Sep 30, 2007


6 years old the young girl

walks into the store...

A younger little child runs into her

fathers arms.

She wants her father..but he

lives far away and she

hasnt seen him in months.

10 years old. she watches her

daddy smoke a cigeratte and

wishes he would put it down

so she could crawl into his lap.

but his eyes are glued to the T.V

12 years old she is lying in her

daddy's lap..and dosent want to move.

They lay there not saying a word..there

eyes on the tv..but their mind on Saturday

The day she has to leave. Once a year

is the plan. him living in Tx. The girl

living aross the states. She needs her

daddy.and wishes he was there as a father

is suppose to be. But his heart is set there

where his " opportunity"in life has come along.

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  • This is sad yet i know what you feell the only difference is my dad lives in my house and doesn't acknowledge that i'm here

    Very well written

    love always
    mandi

  • 17 years ago

    by Devon

    Cool stuff! very talented! i love the way you write in story format! 5/5 i love it