I really liked this peice. This is exacty how I feel right now. Your flow was flawless and the overall peice was amazing.
Great job!
5/5

Amber``

Lordey, was that ever amazing. The beginning stanza pulled me in right from the start, but the following stanzas kept me in. Once again, the imagery was amazing and the flow was perfect. You made it so personal to you, but relateable for others, a great way to show off your talent.

"Spit your poison in my face,
Burn me like the sun,
But it's what I do to myself,
That can never be undone."

^^ LOVE this stanza, amazinggg.

5.5
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Brilliant. 5/5.
I Especially Liked These Lines :

'But it's what I do to myself,
That can never be undone.'