I like the innocence reflected in this poem. There are spelling errors, and I think when you say "scense" you mean "since." Keep writting, don't ever stop. You are a musician, and writting is great way to create songs. Best of luck to you.

I didn't vote on the other "Daddy" poems because I wanted comment all together. (Hope u don't mind) I really loved them all because they were very inspiring. Keep up the good work and don't be so hard on yourself. U really are a good writer, besides it's what comes from the heart that matters.