In My Life

by FlawlesslyTarnished   Sep 30, 2007


Im really not sure where i should place
this poem. so i just placed it here. .

in my life.
i randomly cause pain.
both physical && emotional.
but with nothing to gain.
though. .if i could take it bakk.
im not so sure that i would.
i have many regretz.
but my reasonz are not understood.
i could go on for hours.
trying to explain.
the cause of my actionz.
but you'd label mehh insane.
i could say that im sorry.
to all those ive hurt.
but words dont mean a thing.
when i been such a jerk.
a lie here and there.
that grows to an extent.
but it could just be
cuz of how my hearts been bent.
ive lost emotion && care.
for the others around.
they're no longer a necessity.
to help me from the ground.
i cant make it on my own.
but i refuse to accept this help.
so because of this, i guess.
i'll always be. just by myself. .

this isnt really good. i know.
but i wrote it as it came.
&& it was like. i had an epiphany.
so. .rate && comment please.
will return the favor. :]]

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  • 17 years ago

    by Devon

    Very well done... i would guess this poem reflects a little on ur personality. by the way thnx for comenting on my poem! keep up the great work 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by cory

    Awesome and congrats on your thousanth vote!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Wake

    Wow.. .. all i'd like to say is.. well.. if we knew where the great ones came from... we'd go there everyday ... right? lol.. SUPERB

    "..i could say that im sorry.
    to all those ive hurt.
    but words dont mean a thing.
    when i been such a jerk.
    a lie here and there.
    that grows to an extent.
    but it could just be
    cuz of how my hearts been bent.
    ive lost emotion && care.
    for the others around.
    they're no longer a necessity.
    to help me from the ground.
    i cant make it on my own.
    but i refuse to accept this help.
    so because of this, i guess.
    i'll always be. just by myself.."

    a damn expressive write and the feelings did flow superbly.. a Superb Write this. . and yea, very relatable .. too .. i'd say.
    and the best part is that you had the urge and the feelings and converting them to ink in such an awesome way .. AMAZING..
    Keep it coming .. xP

    ~Wake~

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